Headlines or Subject Lines that Work

 

 

The first thing you must always remember when finding the right subject or headline is that your lead in line must have something to do with the headline or subject line that you are using. If the subject line or headline has nothing to do with what you are selling or it is not mentioned in the body of your ad or letter then the person reading it will not understand what you are talking about or worse yet will feel as thought they have been tricked into reading the ad or letter. You never want to come across to your prospective customer or future partner in business as being untrustworthy or someone that lies or tells untruths. You always want to make that first impression one that they will always remember in a very positive way.

  An example:

Your subject line could be:

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Body:

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I will not fill this page with lots of information that will confuse you - I want you to simply take a short, quick look at a website that will answer all your questions. Give me a short reply and ask me for the link --- you will receive a response ASAP -- look at the link I will send you - then if you are ready to begin milking your business for all its worth - simply click on the join button - or call me.

Ask to see the Utterly Magic Milking Machine now - email : XXXXX@YYY.BBB

 

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Here's a list of "triggers," for instance, coupled with actual examples:


Curiosity ("Revealed! Closely Guarded Secrets For...")

Mystery ("The Five Biggest Mistakes to Avoid By...")

Fear ("Over 98.4% of People End up Broke When...")

Pain ("Suffering From Needless Back Pain? Then...")

Convenience ("How to Increase Your Chances With...")

Envy ("How Fellow Marketer Pummels Competitors By...")

Jealousy ("They All Laughed When... Until I...")

Sloth ("Slash Your Learning Curve By 57% When...")

Love, Lust ("Make Her Fall in Love With You With...")

Shock ("Finally Exposed! Get The Dirty Truth On...")

Greed ("Boost Your Income By More Than 317% When...")

Pride, Power, Ego ("Make Fellow Workers Squirm With...")

Assurance ("... In Less Than 60 Days, Guaranteed!")

Immortality ("Reverse The Aging Process With...")

Anger ("Banks Are Ripping You Off! Here's Why...")

Using some of the triggers mentioned at the beginning, here are some examples of being specific with your headlines:

"Nine Jealously Guarded Techniques That..."

"Here Are 17 of My Most Prized Recipes For..."

"How I Made $42,791.36 in Only 11 Days With..."

"Boost Your Golf Drives By 27 Yards When..."

"A Whole New Way to Lose 45 Pounds in 7 Weeks With..."

"Marketing Toolkit Contains Powertools That..."

"Follow These Eight Magical Steps to..."

"Read This 22-Chapter, 376-Page Powerhouse..."

"The 10 Commandments of Power Positioning..."

"Chop Paperwork By as Much as 47% When..."

"Slash Your Learning Curve By Four Weeks With..."

"... And Start Using Within Only 33 Minutes!"